Poetry can be used to create a clear image ... One has been done for you. Top tip! Assonance is when a vowel sound is repeated in words close together. You might want to match this one up last.

Or assonance, where the middle of the word sounds the same: boy, joy, toy. And that is redrafting, that is editing. And it’s fun because you are like a poetry scientist. Pouring in some assonance.